When you walk around Ulis campus, you usually catch vehicles illegally parking though there are many no parking signs
It’s illegal to park this motorbike in front of the gate
There are a lot of motorbikes parking in no parking zone in Ulis campus
Even government doesn’t follow the rule of parking though there is a no parking signs behind this car.
Illegal parking causes some serious problems such as traffic jam in campus or the lost beauty of the campus. Therefore, to deal with this problem, illegal parking should be punished strictly and the awareness of people should be futher raised.
Ulis News 
So short
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the topic is great. the picture is relevant. But you should describe more
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Thank you for your suggestion
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From group 06: you should be more careful with grammar. For example: “vehicles illegally parking”
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many thanks
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I’m very interested in your topic. The content is OK. However, I can see some mistakes about grammar. Pay attention to them! For example, what do you mean by “there are many no parking signs”, “there is a no parking signs”?
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group 1:
you should be careful to grammar mistake. However, i think you should change the solution, because, if strict punishment is suitable?
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Thank you so much
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I am yến group 6.
To tell the truth, it’s common problem in viet nam not in ulis particular, its hard to say.
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